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There is a song.
Long, long time no sing.
But I still remember it.

通りゃんせ、通りゃんせ
ここはどこの細道じゃ
天神様の細道じゃ
そおっと通してくだしゃんせ
御用のないもの通しゃせぬ
この子の七つのお祝いに
お札を納めにまいります

行きはよいよい帰りは怖い
怖いながらも
通りゃんせ、通りゃんせ

Does that sound,
Something,
Wrong?
I don’ know where that is.

And what the title?
title?
What is this song called?

Who cares.

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I just read a book.
Have I bought the book before?
I may have read the book.
Or read some part of the story at a book shop.

I some time did this.
I have same two books.
No, few time.

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There were some girls on a train near the door.
They were talking an anime’s song.
But they didn’t remember the song.

“I know!”
I was sitting near the door.
The song was going in my head.
“I know!”
“ラムジー、ラムジー、かわい子ちゃん、
ラムジー、ラムジー、おしゃまさん"

They still haven’t.
The song was still going in me.

The door opened.
Closed.

They were gone.
The song haven’t gone.

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I would have thought 「通りゃんせ」 was its title.

no?

There is a song.
Long, long time no sing.
But I still remember it.

通りゃんせ、通りゃんせ
ここはどこの細道じゃ
天神様の細道じゃ
そおっと通してくだしゃんせ
御用のないもの通しゃせぬ
この子の七つのお祝いに
お札を納めにまいります

行きはよいよい帰りは怖い
怖いながらも
通りゃんせ、通りゃんせ

Does that sound,
Something,
Wrong?
I don’ know where that is.

And what the title?
title?
What is this song called?

Who cares.

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I sometimes buy a second or third copy of the same book.

I'm expecting some day I'll for get everything.
Then I'll read my favourite books again and again.
And I enjoy them as much as I did the first time I read them.

What a wonderful thought!

I just read a book.
Have I bought the book before?
I may have read the book.
Or read some part of the story at a book shop.

I some time did this.
I have same two books.
No, few time.

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This is like a snap shot of perfectly ordinary day.

Yet you gave it a special flavour.

Like something between a haiku and a senryu, perhaps?

There were some girls on a train near the door.
They were talking an anime’s song.
But they didn’t remember the song.

“I know!”
I was sitting near the door.
The song was going in my head.
“I know!”
“ラムジー、ラムジー、かわい子ちゃん、
ラムジー、ラムジー、おしゃまさん"

They still haven’t.
The song was still going in me.

The door opened.
Closed.

They were gone.
The song haven’t gone.

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I’ve been writing here.
It’s not going stop so far.

Not expecting that I would write like this.

X’mas is coming.

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Things we don't expect to happen do so sometimes.
And quite often they are pleasant surprises.

Yes, they are some times bad surprises.
But I'd rather something happens than otherwise.
I hope things keep on surprising me.

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You have a birthday.
You have a birthday once a month.
So you have a birthday 12th times a year.
And me.
Is that right?

So a 10 years old boy is 120 months old to 131 months.
If a birthday has every month.
A 50 years old man…
How many cakes would he have eaten?
Doesn’t he like cake?

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What a strange idea!

Almost exactly like Lewis Carroll's.

but then, tori-san, what if you were born on the 31st?

He can only eat about half as many cakes!